Closing Up
a milk blue evening sun
the colour of cold skin
has calmed the day’s heat,
and the irritating chill
that played hide and seek
all day in the garden has
gone home at last,
over dinner we talked,
seriously for once, about
moving to a smaller place
before it’s too late and
pondered over what the
children would think,
after that, we both felt hollow
and couldn’t remember
tasting the food we’d eaten,
whilst this place has been
good to us we both agreed
it wouldn’t be fair to leave
the other to sort out the
mess if either of us
decides to clock off early,
a home is a second skin
that breathes with you,
not a favourite coat that
is easily discarded,
looking out from my desk
there’s now a city
where the fields once were
when we moved in here
forty years ago, a view
across a lifetime that
we never noticed
disappearing
© Graham R Sherwood 5/25
David RL Moore
Sun 11th May 2025 09:46
Hi Graham,
A great idea of a poem/prose with which to convey the invisible creep of time through a life.
Something sad but also beautiful in the image, like a room full of once treasured memories. 👍
David