SOUL OF MY SOUL
Wholeness blossoms now.
He is my echo
He breathes in my space
His very being, mine.
Two streams that now combine
In him, I am defined.
Comments
Mon 5th May 2025 10:54
Dear Naomi,
Your poem "Soul of My Soul" is again beautifully profound. The imagery of two streams combining and becoming one is both powerful and moving, expressing a deep sense of unity and connection. The idea of being defined through another, as an echo and a shared breath, speaks to the sacredness of love and the profound bond between souls. It’s a poignant reflection on the intertwining of identities and the wholeness that comes with love.
Regards,
Rolph
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Naomi
Tue 6th May 2025 14:03
Your words deeply resonate with the sentiment I aimed to convey in the poem and your understanding Rolph is beautifully articulated.
Thank you