SOUL OF MY SOUL
Wholeness blossoms now.
He is my echo
He breathes in my space
His very being, mine.
Two streams that now combine
In him, I am defined.
Comments
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
Wholeness blossoms now.
He is my echo
He breathes in my space
His very being, mine.
Two streams that now combine
In him, I am defined.
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.
Rolph David
Mon 5th May 2025 10:54
Dear Naomi,
Your poem "Soul of My Soul" is again beautifully profound. The imagery of two streams combining and becoming one is both powerful and moving, expressing a deep sense of unity and connection. The idea of being defined through another, as an echo and a shared breath, speaks to the sacredness of love and the profound bond between souls. It’s a poignant reflection on the intertwining of identities and the wholeness that comes with love.
Regards,
Rolph