scaling ivory veils


 

Secrets remain shrouded, unspoken,

yet I see them seep

into the spaces between breaths.

Truth, as it stands,

refuses the grasp of words—

it thrives in the moments

we dare not recount.

 

The echo of vanity

envelops everything I once chased,

leaving me at odds

with the reflection staring back.

Comfort is fleeting, or perhaps,

it never truly existed for me.

 

I hold to the notion they told me—

that truth is what we shape it to be.

Still, my hands shake beneath its weight,

knowing life demands haste

while the sun glares against unmown hay.

Time always slips through fingers I’d thought steady.

 

Where truth dares to illuminate,

I blink against its harsh light, recoiling,

as concealment breeds its own sanctuary.
The lies, given ivory form,

pierce me again and again.
 

Each wound bares a history

I could barely recount,

yet I trace its edges

when silence falls—remembering.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Marla Joy

Tue 6th May 2025 04:56

RBK,
I have read this many times. I believe you can never go wrong by speaking the truth from your heart. What you have done here gives added dimension to the strength and impact of this poem.

Marla

Rolph David

Mon 5th May 2025 11:24

Hello Red,
"Scaling Ivory Veils" is indeed a hauntingly evocative poem. The tension between truth and concealment, the quiet desperation in the search for meaning, and the visceral imagery of wounds that both scar and illuminate are deeply compelling. The way you capture the fragility of time, the weight of unspoken truths, and the tension of holding onto ideals while struggling with their reality is powerfully felt. The ivory form of lies piercing through, despite our best efforts to hide from them, leaves a lasting impression.
Regards,
Rolph

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Red Brick Keshner

Mon 5th May 2025 01:16

~on “revelatory” @Marla Joy 🕊hoping this brings a texture to its base form 🙏🏻🌷RBK

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