Shimmer.

Do not disturb the dust 

There is value to be found

In the lightest of touch

The air should only

Slightly shimmer

 

If your breath dares disturb

The bird

Or your footsteps wound

The earth

All is lost

 

Pay attention to the moon

She is friends with starlight

Her secrets must be kept

Lest she lose her glimmer

 

You will not find a confidante 

In the wind 

So, go quietly

And listen, silently. 

Clare Kinnaird, 2025. 

 

 

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 5th May 2025 09:05

'The lightest of touch' is what we need today, Clare. Consideration, kindness and respect all shine through in this poem.

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Marla Joy

Sun 4th May 2025 19:01

Claire,
I agree with Graham. This has a nice touch of personifying elements of nature, the moon, the wind. Nice.

Marla

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Clare

Sun 4th May 2025 11:02

Graham, Thank you so much for your comment. It really is something I value greatly - it is an honour to have my work appreciated by you. 🙏🏻

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 3rd May 2025 21:47

Claire , I am beginning to like your work very much., well done again for this.

G.

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