Triumph.
There's a timid bloom
Bursting now through the concrete--
--A tiny triumph...
Comments
Nice Hai-cuckoo!💐
Tue 22nd Apr 2025 14:15
Thank you so much, Stephen, your kind comment is very encouraging! 😊
The Haiku form makes a powerful statement here, Holden.
You're welcome Holden Moncrieff. Coming straight from Kevin (although he is protecting himself and his loves now). Those
vengeful suicidals. So much of a problem. How should we name them?
Vengesidals? (written: Vengesuidal)
Mon 21st Apr 2025 22:16
Thank you, Auracle, for your apt and beautiful reference! 🌷😊
Like Tupac Shakur once wrote:
'Long live the rose that grew from concrete
when no one else even cared!'
Mon 21st Apr 2025 13:28
Thank you, Graham, John F B, and John, for your lovely comments, they mean a lot! 😊💖
The power of life.
This poem seems spare, like it could be fleshed out and made more flamboyant and pretty, but resists a floweriness - to its credit I would say. 😎
The epitome of true willpower and strength
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Holden Moncrieff
Thu 24th Apr 2025 17:14
Thank you very much, Uilleam! 😄💐