Aubade-esque

 

 

I come awake, sunlight banishing the night,

clawing at curtains it smears the shabby walls...

the debris of yesterday best forgotten offends my sight,

relentless optimism cares not where on it falls.

 

The fog of memory lifts, dreams combust in vampiric flame.

I am adrift, ripped too early from interstellar torpor.

It's not that heavenly bodies could be held to any blame

when sometimes they interrupt, but "please, no fucking more"

 

The street won't relent for birdsong or for breeze,

tongues and footfall percuss unconcerned with my demise...

I curse the brutal concrete and give worship to the trees

denying gods my forfeit who let such horrors rise.

 

Repel the prying rays, permit the darkness stay,

that I might curl one more dream around a world asleep...

to slumber through the noise and the ravages of day,

and not to wake in this one, more damage here to reap.

 

https://wolfgarwords.com/2025/04/02/the-wretched-fool/

Audio and Video available at link below

 

  

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David RL Moore

Wed 16th Apr 2025 09:55

Thanks for the recent like Hugh.

David

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David RL Moore

Mon 14th Apr 2025 08:57

Thanks for the latest likes on this one.

I've been away for a few days, and although my imagination has been in overdrive my words are stuck in the gearbox.

I'm waiting for the road to open up in front of me, let's see.

David.

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David RL Moore

Thu 3rd Apr 2025 15:29

Hi Graham,

I'm not quite sure I understand the "edit function" as you put it...I edit for grammatical purposes because I'm an illiterate bottom feeder, other than that my edits are emotional in an attempt to get to the real stuff.

As ever I appreciate your reading and comments, thank you.

David RL Moore

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B_FafCJbyWE

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=85Nsyib4bv8

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jHR3uEOkkSo&list=RDMM&index=9

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 3rd Apr 2025 15:21

I use the edit function quite a lot too but never mention it hoping people won't notice.

(Haha! I've just googled Aubade and this is an edited comment now!)

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David RL Moore

Thu 3rd Apr 2025 15:19

Scary stuff eh! poetry.

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David RL Moore

Thu 3rd Apr 2025 10:00

I have revised this unsatisfactory piece.

The rythme had been purposely inverted so as to disrupt the reading, sometimes it works better than others. In this case it really didn't.

I have hacked some weeds away and renamed it, hopefully making it a little less navel-gazing in tone (although not entirely, I admit)

David RL Moore

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pqx70w64cQo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDW-W2J84Hc

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David RL Moore

Wed 2nd Apr 2025 16:19

Thanks Landi,

those days when you simply want to stay under the covers, and then some.

I had been reading "Aubade" and wanted to say something similar but not quite. This fell out of somewhere, somehow.

David RL Moore

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Landi Cruz

Wed 2nd Apr 2025 15:58

"..one more time around the glowing jewel..."

to think of what the day removes from our sight in those still moments before the world rushes in...

What a strong line...

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