City of Rooftops

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This city of rooftops
this tangle of streets
Houses perched 
upon hillsides
This fragmented view
a colour sample chart
of various greys
Choose any shade…

A ghoulish wind rattles 
shivering window panes
as remnants of noisy leaves 
shuffle down crooked lanes
Frozen snow 
blocking passageways
I wiggle my toes
to keep the blood flowing

Between five rivers
a hill I rise, or will soon descend
The greyscale and greens
of this city’s scenes
Twigs imprisoned
in frosty potholes
The door-creek of icicles
tickled by winter's breath

The oil lamp flame
fidgets and flickers
fighting behind smudged glass
goes another round with this season…
 

wintercitynorthern town

◄ Hinterland Blues

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Tom

Mon 17th Mar 2025 12:12

Thanks for the comments Uilleam and Flyntland 😃 I had a lot of time on my hands in January to contemplate the freezing city. I normally prefer to write narrative poetry but here, I just thought I'd let the cold grey winter in...

Thanks also to Red Brick, Hugh, Stephen, Aisha, Holden, Helene, Yasoda, Yanma and Naomi for reading!

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Flyntland

Thu 13th Mar 2025 12:05

This very descriptive poem is visual - I see the roofs, and the colours, I particularly like the "oil lamp flame" "behind smudged glass"

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 13th Mar 2025 11:37

Thanks, Tom.
I like "The greyscale and greens
of this city’s scenes"
Yesterday's northern sunshine was deceptive. I went out, dismissing advice to wear a pully. My hands turned blue whilst waiting at the bus stop. "N'er cast a clout 'til May is out", as they say!

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