A SHARED SPACE second posting

 

 

Thunder headed brooding knoll

heathered black and heavy green,

ravined by waters cutting edge

flushing silver silted streams.

 

Pebble bright mosaic gullies

delta into waiting hollows,

water, smoothing grey silk slime,

flooding meadows, forming pools.

 

Bog grass floats a yellow raft

birches filter curlews cry,

fallow slots, precision printed,

sharp, divided, water filled,

 

Shadows glide on silver sand,

nomadic cultures meet and greet,

a secret place, a fragile land,

where voices hush

                                   and 'dreamers' meet.

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◄ UKRAINE - - ? GAZA - - -? -- and all places in-between

MEMORIES OF BOLTON ►

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Flyntland

Fri 14th Mar 2025 17:53

David,

"That somewhere in my conjuring
his calls to me appear"

"That men should drink from wisdoms font"

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Flyntland

Fri 14th Mar 2025 17:47

thank you, to Hugh, Aisha, Holden, Manish, and Yanma, I really appreciate the fact that you have read my poem and clicked on a flower. I find it very encouraging.

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David RL Moore

Thu 13th Mar 2025 15:45

Hi Flyntland,

I read this when you posted it, I didn't comment then as I wasn't sure how to.

I immediately saw echoes of the sentiment I shared in my poem "Shared Songs" it seemed to me you were summoning a magical place (although not an unnatural one) one which exists in so many places yet its beauty is not seen by many in their rush to get to other places.

For me the coloures and mood projected the Highland Landscape of my homeland, Scotland.

David RL Moore

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Flyntland

Thu 13th Mar 2025 15:28

Thank you, Uilleam, for your comment. I am glad that you could pick up on what I saw. It was wild and beautiful, and apart from my husband and me, plus dogs, it was empty.

Thank you also RBK. and David for your valued likes.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 13th Mar 2025 09:16

Thank you Flyntland. I can see aspects of the West Pennine moors in that.

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