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THE ALCHEMY

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An intimidated heart recoils from his touch,  

While a ravenous heart surrenders to hunger-

An experiment beyond the weak

A lesson to the fools

To those of love and hate.  

Trembling like a loose leaf

Later trampled, buried in the soil

Lost among moss and dead trees.  

A forgotten prayer whispered to the wind

A wish lost to the endless night.

 

Father, Father

Grant me a heart stronger than soft grass

Tender like stone rivers

Shaped and purified by holy waters.  

Give me a kinder heart

Lest I fall to greed

And lose myself in a name not my own.  

Let my heart be a fortress

Yet gentle enough to cradle the world

Untouched by the thorns of vanity or pride.  

Let it beat with the rhythm of the stars

Unyielding in its compassion

Clear as the morning light.  

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Naomi

Sun 19th Jan 2025 16:10

Hélène,
Thank you so much for your thoughtful words! I’m glad the poem resonated with you. The balance between guarding one's heart while staying open to love is a delicate one, and I agree. It often comes after deep healing. I’m so happy you connected with the title too.

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Hélène

Sun 19th Jan 2025 12:37

A gorgeous, powerful poem, Naomi.
"Let my heart be a fortress
Yet gentle enough to cradle the world." A heart closed off enough so as not to lose oneself in another, but a heart open enough to remain loving and caring. Perhaps many of us learn this lesson after suffering heartache and then healing. Love the title too, Alchemy!

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Naomi

Sun 19th Jan 2025 12:16

Thank you Uilleam. May we both find the strength to cultivate kindness and humility in our hearts.

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 19th Jan 2025 11:22

My prayer too, Naomi.
Give me a kinder heart
Lest I fall to greed
💗

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Naomi

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:30

Dear Rolph,
Thank you so much for your kind words. I'm glad the piece resonated with you. Vulnerability, longing, and strength are complex themes, and it's rewarding to know that they connected with you. I appreciate your thoughtful feedback.
Naomi

Rolph David

Sat 18th Jan 2025 18:12

Dear Naomi,
The way you explore vulnerability, longing, and strength is both powerful and moving. The plea for a heart that is both unyielding and compassionate is deeply resonant. Thank you for sharing such a thoughtful piece.
Cheerio,
Rolph

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