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Elva Zona's Last Act!

In 1897, the death of Elva Zona Heaster was deemed accidental, but her mother’s grief would not subside. When Zona’s ghost appeared, it revealed a shocking truth that no one could ignore. Based on a chilling true event, Elva Zona’s Last Act explores a haunting tale of love, betrayal, and justice from beyond the grave.

Born in 1876, Elva Zona Heaster,

Of her youth, only fragments reside.

In Greenbrier County, where love did deceive her,

She met Edward Shue, and became his bride.

 

Edward, a drifter with charm in his speaking,

To Zona, he promised a life renewed.

Her mother, Mary Jane, saw danger peaking,

Yet Zona followed him, by love subdued.

 

January days brought grief unspoken,

A message came, a boy in despair.

He found her still, her neck was broken,

At the stair’s foot, in silence laid there.

 

Edward, too quick, with trembling devotion,

Prepared her body, with a high collar bound.

A fainting spell was the doctor’s notion,

But doubts began to gather around.

 

Mary Jane prayed with relentless yearning,

Four weeks passed, then Zona returned.

A spirit of anguish, her torment burning,

The truth of her end was harshly learned.

 

She spoke of cruelty, the truth made clear,

A broken neck, her life cut short.

Edward’s rage, no mercy near,

Revealed her death, his violent report.

 

The grave unearthed, a truth uncovered,

The autopsy spoke where the spirit tread.

Edward’s lies and cruelty hovered,

The cervical fracture told of the dead.

 

Prison’s chains held Edward’s ambition,

Seven wives his gruesome desire.

But death in a cell was his life’s fruition,

Zona’s justice brought her mother peace to aspire.

 

The ghost spoke once; it spoke with meaning,

Its spectral proof of violence and dread.

Elva’s fate, her truth redeeming,

Her voice exposed the crimes he’d fled.

 

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Comments

Rolph David

Sun 17th Nov 2024 08:03

Good morning Uilleam,
Thank you very much for your compliment. I was a little hesitant about uploading it here, as I don't really agree with the length of some of the verses and the overall metre used. It's not good enough for me yet. Once I have time, I'll revise it and upload it again - the edited version of course. I doubt whether it's good enough to be set to music at the moment. For that it's not good enough and consistent. But thank you for thinking it's possible that it could stand up to being set to music. It certainly has ballad-like traits, but it is certainly not long enough to fulfil the criteria of a ballad.
Have a nice Sunday,
best regards,

Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sat 16th Nov 2024 17:21

What a tragic tale Rolph! and well written.
You have the makings of a ballad perhaps (to set to music?)

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