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A Life Renewed 

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As the daylight succumbs to the night

The cutting edge of the shadow maker falls

Upon my conscious

Decision surrenders to the echo of footsteps

Mixed with the faint whispering of the wind

Come, follow me

There is no regard to time or its passing

When the wind beckons for me to come

I must follow

Now the whispers of the wind have ceased

The solitude heavy with a deafening hum

In my ears

Eternity lay draped across the sands of time

The translucent glow shimmers so bright

Bridges them both

A mist of light fell over me like a cleansing wave

Restoration and jubilee swelled up in my soul

A life renewed

◄ A Thought About a Thought

Wisdom’s Age ►


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Patricia Ziel

Sun 30th Jun 2024 13:03

Wonderful! Your work also takes me on a journey, a revelatory one! Thank you!

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Tim Higbee

Mon 10th Jun 2024 18:02

Manish and Keith, I thank you so much for your kind comments. It is humbling indeed to receive such opinions.
Thank you!
Thanks also to those of you who liked the poem. It is equally appreciated.

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keith jeffries

Sat 8th Jun 2024 15:37

Seldom have I read a poem in which the language is so incredibly well used. You are a wordsmith indeed.
Thank you for this,

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Manish Singh Rajput

Sat 8th Jun 2024 13:35

I loved the profound journey that this poem took me on, Tim, and an even profound ending image to it. Brilliantly done as always!
Thank you.

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