OUCH!

I received this observation from a long time pal and couldn't resist posting it for its jovial literary connotation.

Read on.

Despite it being windy and wet, I decided to erect a marquee in my garden, complete with flashing lights

and the rhythmic beat of loud music:

Now is the winter of my disco tent!

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◄ WHY?

LOVE, COME IF YOU CAN ►

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Ray Miller

Wed 10th Apr 2024 09:06

Very good. I wonder if you could make a "proper" poem out of it, with rhymes an all. There's parky/marquee for a start.

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