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Beyond the Valley

 

Originally called "Bethany beyond the Jordan" Because God is now business and copyright: renamed "Beyond the Valley"

 

Falling from the heaven's gate

toward the ruined Jericho

the river cuts the valley straight,

between two lands forged long ago.

 

From its waters kings rose up

anointed by unfounded creed,

that all who drink its holy cup

ensure their words live on in-deed.

 

Of deeds and words, where is their fruit?

that hasn't poisoned all that flows,

or tainted tree from branch to root

so much now it's all that grows.

 

Beyond the valley men cry out

their kingdoms raise themselves to dust,

their eyes raised up their voices shout

where are the gods in who we trust.

 

Audio and Video at link below

https://wolfgarwords.com/2024/04/02/beyond-the-valley/

 

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David RL Moore

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 18:40

Thanks to those who have posted recent likes on this one today.

I think today a few more people may be asking the question posed in the final stanza, no answer will come.

Quite why it would take so long to question is totally beyond my comprehension.

David.

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David RL Moore

Wed 3rd Apr 2024 06:20

Thank you for the generous comment Bethany, and to those who sent flowers.

Writers such as Tolkien, Lucas and Shakespeare borrowed heavily from biblical imagery and story...with only a limited number of stories available almost everything is dilution.

That said this is straight "Bible"

Poetic license; my reference to Jericho is of its biblical incarnation, it is no longer a ruin..although after Friday Prayers it often burns.

The river course is verdant all the way to Galilee in contrast to the surrounding Desert.

David

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Bethany Sallis

Tue 2nd Apr 2024 17:42

Teensy hints of Tolkiens ' rings ' David 👍, ( imho ) and this appraisal, has nothing to with with the fact that my name is mentioned, but has everything to do with the enjoyments of breathing in, pure poetic air, emanating from every line, bigtime!

Beth

p.s. did I also mention humungously inspiring?

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