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The Washing on the Line

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The washing on the line is mine, is mine;

The washing on the line, it dries, it dries.

My best friend down the road, he dies, he dies;

Our enemy of old, he lies, he lies.

The washing on the line, it sighs, it sighs.

 

The washing on the line is mine, is mine;

The washing on the line, it blows, it blows.

Desire for revenge, it grows, it grows;

The guilty man nearby, he crows, he crows.

The washing on the line, it knows, it knows.

 

The washing on the line is mine, is mine;

The washing on the line will hang, will hang.

The bell for just desserts, it rang, it rang,

And retribution’s voice, it sang, it sang.

The washing on the line cried bang, cried bang!

 

The washing on the line, which once was mine,

Has long departed to the mists of time:

An inevitable yet ghoulish crime;

The washing on the line has no strength to climb

Out of the mists, out of the mists of time.

Warallegory

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Words from Bucha (April 2024) ►

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 1st Apr 2024 07:17

Thank you for your comments, which I appreciate very much.

And thanks to Nigel, Hugh, Holden, K Lynn, Manish and Rob for liking this.

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Bethany Sallis

Sun 31st Mar 2024 00:08

Totally agree with both previos comments.
Well done, Mr G!



Beth

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David RL Moore

Sat 30th Mar 2024 23:35

I couldn't agree with Graham's reinforced qualifucation more, unless I deleted this and then reposted it.

Just a note, the first line had me thinking of "The fog on The Tyne" after which I adapted your text in my head to fit. Maybe a little Don Henley, "Dirty Laundry" also.

I think this might be improved with a little paring down.

David

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 30th Mar 2024 22:56

A great metaphor that carries your message well! Bravo!

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