song of pure desperation.
Floating on air
love so hurting it brought us here
our eyes locked tight seems fair
our lives went by without a care
touching time kept creeping up on us
warning fiercely with all sorts of flashing lights
escaping, we have tried to cheat death itself
lying to him and
hiding up to the attic
just be silent
for a second
dont move a muscle
i beg you
let our sweat drip
salt on our lips
did we left our scent
senses working overtime
making necessary plans, it all came full scale crashing down.
keith jeffries
Sat 6th Apr 2024 23:27
This poem finds a place within me which I cannot explain. Powerfully written. i think I have been in this place. Your use of language is spot on.
Thanks,
Keith