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The Braithwaite Boy

I knew the Braithwaite boy at school;

I knew him when he started work.

He bagged fruit at the market stall:

Quite slow, but never one to shirk.

 

His parents lived beside the park;

They were the type to put on airs.

They saw him as an office clerk

Or in the city selling shares.

 

But he was quiet, often teased,

And ready to accept his place;

The customers seemed rather pleased

With his politeness and his grace.

 

Though as he drifts past pension age,

His contribution may seem small,

A life’s contentment will assuage

The advent of its tallest wall.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 13th Mar 2024 21:45

Thank you Landi, Leon, Graham and Bethany for your generous comments. It struck me that this could be a companion piece to 'Big Lad', a poem I wrote a few years ago, where the outcome of the protagonist's life is different, though not necessarily better.

And thanks to Holden, Tim, David and Manish for liking this.



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Bethany Sallis

Wed 13th Mar 2024 10:23

Lovely poem Stephen, Thank you.

Beth

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 12th Mar 2024 20:36

Horses for courses eh?
A pleasantly balanced piece Stephen. A life well told in 16 lines!

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leon stolgard

Tue 12th Mar 2024 17:20

you always tell a very good poetical story Mr G.

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Landi Cruz

Tue 12th Mar 2024 17:18

What might be seen of that extraordinary young man in another world?



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