Not a love poem

This isn't just a love poem.

This isn't just a sonnet

written in a classic

Shakespeare style

or Keats's

‘Shall I compare you

to a summer’s day’

This is penned

on a cold, windy day

waiting for an interview

I had arrived

early, but as soon

as I left

the station,

it started snowing,

and god, did it snow.

God, did it snow.

It wasn’t like

it came down

in a few little drips

it was almost

like somebody

had decided

to throw bullets,

leaving me wishing

I had stayed in bed

and not tried

to be fancy with my poems.

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w3sko

Tue 12th Mar 2024 03:25

nice ending

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David RL Moore

Mon 11th Mar 2024 20:43

So what is it then?

It sounds like a poem about having a shit day, which is what most poems are often about. In that context it's a worthy undertaking, congratulations for that.

I guess you didn't get the job.

David.

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