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A Genesis?

 

The world keeps shouting 

whilst, the quiet

sit in despair, witnessing 

the mould & rot spread

Trying not to Inhale 

greedy spores that rot hope

Exhaling a desperate,  empty foreboding 

‘Times they are a-changin’’

Echoes from an old radio somewhere 

A white flag drifts past, stained red

We rub our eyes

But, there's fire in the sky

And death all around. 

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◄ Nothing but bored.

The Closing Of The Red Sea ►

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 8th Feb 2024 22:39

Thank you, Manish. I'm humbled that you think so. 😊
And thank you, Tim. Glad you liked it!
And thanks for the Likes everyone 🌈

Tim Higbee

Wed 7th Feb 2024 03:16

I like the imagery of this, Stephen. I also like the nod to Dylan in there. Great job.

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Manish Singh Rajput

Mon 5th Feb 2024 04:11

A well constructed poem, Stephen A. Every line is impactful and powerful. Well done, my friend.
Thank you.

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