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Anthem for all all these damned Youngsters

5219 suicides were registered in England in 2021
The male suicide rate is 3 times that of females. The highest rates were in the NE and NW of England.
The Samaritans 2023 

Castlegate House Art Gallery Cumbria - 20th Century British and  Contemporary Art Gallery, Lake District

 

What church-bells or calls to prayer by the muezzin
For all these young men who kill themselves?
— Only the monstrous hypocrisy of the media
--- Only the slurp, slurp, slurp as we all become greedier.

Call attention to this national blood-loss of young lives
No mockeries now for them from politicians who do not care
If these young men are 'fit for purpose', common or rare? 
Only the voices of the mothers whose sons are no longer there —
Only black and white boys' photographs and quiet, unspoken prayers;

 Recall the lives of those who were repelled by the living nightmare
Of modernity and money. No candles now for the loss of these young lives
Look into their eyes as they pass you by

And you will see the holy glimmer of goodbyes
As sure as suicide in the trenches did a hundred years ago.
And we must learn to value our rough young men again
As much as we did the sacrifices of their great-grandfathers.

 

 

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John Marks

Sat 24th Jun 2023 22:24

Suicide's Note

The calm,
Cool face of the river
Asked me for a kiss.

Langston Hughes

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 23rd Jun 2023 10:47

Horrifically I have thought for a long time we are gradually becoming the next new state of the USA. My granddaughter terms me a guy! Asks for candy and watches families of gobby loud yank families on YouTube making a buck from her patronage. I’m keeping the drawbridge tightly shut. Hell yeh!

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 23rd Jun 2023 10:06

When I see "entertainment" ads on TV such as love island etc, I despair at the empty headedness of it all.

Do our young lads -and our girls- actually aspire to live up to that kind of society? If they do, I think that goes a long way to explaining some the problems they have to deal with.

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Greg Freeman

Fri 23rd Jun 2023 09:01

Perhaps many young men these days feels as earmarked for death as the men Wilfred Owen saw head to the front in the first world war. It is up to those in power to provide them with a future, surely. A modern 'Anthem for Doomed Youth', indeed.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 23rd Jun 2023 06:17

You highlight this issue in a superbly written poem, John. One of the best I have read for a long time.

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 23rd Jun 2023 05:53

Thanks Clare.
I've been retired for a long time now and I miss my pals.

But we old timers who spend a lot of time in the pub-we talk about stuff-if it's only passing the time of day - how's your leg? how's the missus?
Do young men these days benefit from that kind of interaction?

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keith jeffries

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 23:07

A poem with the raw truth of an appalling situation. Money and modernity; may I had futility and a lack of genuine love and care. These guys are in a category more vulnerable than those who sacrificed their lives in the world wars, because any meaning in life has gone. Purposefulness has passed them by. I'm afraid I see little hope on the horizon.
John, this poem has raised an issue which we turn away from but needs to be urgently addressed.
Thanks,
Keith

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Clare

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 22:51

Uilleam, suicide amongst young males has been disproportionate for a very long time. I don’t suppose the current climate is doing anything to help the situation. It’s a very sad state of affairs. 😢

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 22:40

Thank you John for bringing this sad state of affairs to our attention.

Is there something about our society which makes these tradgedies as numerous as they are?

With the current depletion of mental health services ( EG. children in crisis being held in police cells instead of receiving care from the appropriate services) the situation isn't going to ammeliorate any time soon.
💓

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Clare

Thu 22nd Jun 2023 22:19

You stay true to form. Your poetry is powerful and always demands the reader to reflect. I greatly admire your work and how you never shy away from the important issues. Thank you for this.

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