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Time

Expressions of Love: Part VI

Title: Time

Time flows by
Like the silky fabric
Of her dress
Each ticking second
A slight touch 
Each ticking minute
A flowing twist
Each ticking hour
A small rustle
The fabric of time
Is the fabric of her dress

 

-Jaxy

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Jason Phillips

Fri 19th May 2023 18:55

Hi Uilleam,

Thank you for your comment! A lot of the time, "the fabric of time" represents how gravity affects our perception of time...because of gravity and all sorts of other things, the more mass an object in space has, the more it affects our perception of time(don't quote me, I'm not a scientist)....this is why, the closer you get to a black hole, the more time is diolated...black holes are incredibly massive and "weigh" down the fabric of time.

How does this relate? Well, this poem is about someone who has such a massive impact on my life, that she literally is my universe...time is her dress, and her impact is so massive that it changes my perception of time.

Thanks again!
Jason

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 19th May 2023 07:25

Thanks Jason.

The fabric of time.

That phrase seems so familiar-don't know where I've heard it before?

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