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Hear My Thoughts

Expressions of Love: Part III

Title: Hear My Thoughts

Hear now

Hear my thoughts

These thoughts of you

As I drive alone

Through the night

The distance between each lightpole

Like the pulse of my heart

As it reaches out to you

Beating strong against all odds 

When the snare of a drum

Is like the tail of the snake 

That is your soul

Such a beautiful sound

When the high notes

Of an acclaimed song

Is like the frequency 

Of your laugh

It fills me full

When the low rumble

That is your purr

Becomes the happy musings 

Of a favorite feline

The companionship is cherished

Hear now

Hear my thoughts of you

And know

I love you 

I love you like moon 

Loves the sun

Hear now

Hear now

My thoughts

 

-Jaxy

thoughts that keep you awake

◄ How I feel now

The Honor of a Knight ►

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Jason Phillips

Mon 8th May 2023 10:06

Thank you Ulleam and Neil for your kind words! I don’t often write in this way, but it struck me as I was in my way home. I appreciate your support and I will keep writing about Love indeed 😉

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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Sun 7th May 2023 09:00

"If poetry be the food of love, write on!"

Sorry, Mr Shakespeare.😊

Neil Miller

Sun 7th May 2023 07:27

Love the visualization in this Jason, theres so much passion found in love, never stop writing about it!

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