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Prayer for Openness

Is it all about us-against-them

or are we all-in-this-together?

When I put you in a box

I hope I remember 

to keep the lid open

so I will then remember

to open my mind

& discard the box altogether.

How much better life is

when we swim together

like salmon in a stream

rather than drown each other

in hateful verbiage!

May my words be kind,

may my thoughts be gentle,

this I ask.

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Hélène

Mon 27th Feb 2023 15:25

Thanks M.C. & Stephen & everyone for comments/likes. Idealism & realism...balancing each other out...both are helpful I do think.

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Stephen Gospage

Mon 27th Feb 2023 13:57

The points are well made, Hélène, but we need the hope and idealism of your poem.

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Hélène

Sun 26th Feb 2023 16:15

Yup, you are right, sadly. Thank goodness for structures (government, laws, etc.) that keep us safe from each other. Sigh.

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 26th Feb 2023 14:51

Nice idea. But since when has humanity per se been so inclined?
The advice about hoping for peace but being ready for war can
be applied to attitudes among human beings even in day to day
existence. Thankfully, the majority of the time sees law and
proper regard prevail but the outlaw power-grubbing mentality
is always there, lurking from generation to generation, seeking
the chance to impose, prevail and profit. Being aware is a huge
advantage in the preservation of the orderly well-being that is
the bedrock of any functioning society.

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