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Purest heart speaks wisest wisdom

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Opinions can be ignored, mocked,
S'fair enough – satirists like that stuff
Swift’d be buggered.
Otherwise &  of course,
No-one has the right not to be offended
I am offended everyday
By the complacent, old
Bastards who hang on to every penny
Take every credit
& have the empathy of granite
& who  so easily condemn
those poorer or less well-educated
than them.

I love the novels of Dickens
For the way that he exposes hypocrisy
Like a surgeon exposes the aorta
His touch and tone
take my breath away.

A note held
for so long.
It ends up
as a song.

 

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Hélène

Fri 6th Jan 2023 16:52

Thanks John for sharing music, poetry, & compassion. So needed in this world.

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John Marks

Fri 6th Jan 2023 16:26

Thank you so much Flyntland, Ghazala,, Stephen G, Tom, Leon, Stephen A. Tom. Holden and Frederick.

Lucifer, brightest of bright angels, God's seraphim, was sent to hell for the sin of pride. It is so stupid to be proud of those aspects of our life that are given to us merely by being born: our language, country, religion, skin colour, sexuality, intelligence, athletic prowess etc etc.

"My command is this: Love each other as I have loved you. Greater love has no one than this: to lay down one’s life for one’s friends." John 15:12-13

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Flyntland

Thu 5th Jan 2023 10:00

John you have exposed the self righteous and heartless mindset of our society. Those born into 'normal' families feel that they can take the credit for their 'normality' and self belief, they look down on those who have had to go it alone, who's lives are plagued by lack of guidence and self confidence.

I agree with Ghazala's comment - her kindness shines through her words.

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Ghazala lari

Thu 5th Jan 2023 08:09

A poem with thoughts most of us will agree upon. deeply thought words that's brilliantly expressed.

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