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Parachutes

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These little parachutes of hope and love,

Which float beneath a scowling new year sky,

Will counteract, with luck, the force of hate,

The universal half-truth, and the lie.

 

Though we take pot-shots at the usual crowd,

And don’t look up above to see what’s there,

The parachutes may lead to better things

Than one more year of feeble, standard fare.

new year

◄ Odesa

Muttering ►

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 22nd Jan 2023 21:25

Thank you so much for your kind comment, Grace.

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Grace

Sun 22nd Jan 2023 09:28

I love how hopeful this is! 😊

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 15th Jan 2023 16:10

Thank you so much for this moving piece of verse, Philip. In many ways, human life is so fragile.
And thanks to Steve, Sofia and Holden for your support

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Philip Stevens

Sun 15th Jan 2023 01:04

When I was about 20 which was a long time ago I sat with an ex vet who served during the WW2....sipping neat whiskey and half a beer....

"He spoke of falling candles
And how of in the dark
A man’s shoot when it did not open
Flickered like a spark.

Many times he would land safely
Then pause and look to the sky
There he would see a flickering light
And know a man was about to die"

True story

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 08:50

Thank you for the comments, John and Flyntland. We need these little parachutes, hopefully of the right kind, to stay optimistic about 2023.

And thanks to Nigel, Frederick, K Lynn, Rudyard; Rose, Hélène, Patricia and Stefan for liking this.

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John Coopey

Tue 3rd Jan 2023 08:38

I fear the parachutes may be of a different kind, Stephen. But, like you, I hope.

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Flyntland

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:53

This poem is relevent to so many situations - many of us would love to - both send and recieve a - 'little parachute of love' - It would be such a lovely start to 2023

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Stephen Gospage

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:37

Thank you so much, Graham. I appreciate the encouragement and look forward to WOL poets doing this vital year proud.

All the best to you,
Steve

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 1st Jan 2023 15:23

I think we all share your optimism Stephen and applaud you for keeping this subject matter foremost in our WOL poets' mindset.
I think the people of Ukraine need as many parachutes of hope as they can get. Bravo!

G

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