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Time

Some say time is an illusion,

But I believe this not to be;

For time is present everywhere,

And waits to swallow you and me.

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Replacement is the key to time;

Others step in as it rolls by:

Our school, our work, our love, our home –

These possessions appear to fly

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Into the lap of someone else,

Who takes your desk and house and bed,

While you have seen the years consumed

And now look on, unfit or dead.

◄ 1966

High Season (Our Village Liberated) ►

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 15th Sep 2022 17:13

I would like to thank John B, John C and John S, as well as Holden, for their comments.

It's true that this is a rather gloomy piece, but I am fascinated by the passage of time and the inevitability of change. I often heard it said at work that no one is indispensable, and in the end time will dispense with everyone. Which is not to say that we can't enjoy ourselves until it happens!

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John Coopey

Thu 15th Sep 2022 13:38

It is truly the cruellest thief.

Holden Moncrieff

Thu 15th Sep 2022 01:59

A profound poem of uncomfortable truths, Stephen! 🌷

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john short

Wed 14th Sep 2022 22:45

Hi Stephen

As the Taoists say: the only thing that doesn't change is change. Time kills us and we are replaced. It's the way of things. You could send poems like this to Pulsar Poetry. A small ezine based in Swindon, going since 1995. Might be a good fit.

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John Botterill

Wed 14th Sep 2022 20:53

Brilliant, Stephen. As Flyntland says, so true. Not sure I need a happy one. This truth will suffice. Bravo! Spot on!

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Sep 2022 16:59

Thank you, Flyntland. I understand and I'll try to cheer you up in a future poem.

And thanks to Frederick, John, Stephen, Rudyard, Kelvin and K Lynn for liking this poem.

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Flyntland

Tue 13th Sep 2022 14:50

This is well put and is so true πŸ˜‚- but as I am on the wrong end of time - please write a happy one to follow on this oneπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I need cheering up.

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