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The Missing Piece

The last one of a thousand pieces,

Ridiculed and taunted me.

I could feel its jagged edges,

Poking out from my old settee. 

 

A Stanley knife was the answer.

I cut a neat slit across the back.

I soon stood in proud possession,

Of the missing piece I lacked.

 

It was the moment of completion,

Like the day we married, you and I,

Bringing joy and exhilaration!

You’re my missing piece of sky!

◄ Sandcastles

Living the Dream... ►

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John Botterill

Sun 21st Aug 2022 10:32

Thanks for the like, Stephen A and John C 😀

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John Botterill

Sat 20th Aug 2022 19:43

Many thanks, KJ. Much appreciated! 😀

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kJ Walker

Sat 20th Aug 2022 16:29

I liked this one John, especially the end.

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John Botterill

Sat 20th Aug 2022 15:29

Thanks for the likes Julie, Clare, Holden, Frederick, Uilleam, Russel and, Moonlight,

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John Botterill

Sat 20th Aug 2022 15:23

Thanks Stephen. I didn't know it was going to end like that when I started writing it. I always like it when poems write themselves haha😀

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julie callaghan

Sat 20th Aug 2022 14:44

Another puzzle complete 😁

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 20th Aug 2022 14:07

A lovely twist at the end, John. The start reminded me of Alan Bennett's 'There's always that little bit in the corner you can't get at' from Beyond the Fringe.

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