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Ceremony

Ceremony, like death, is all around.

Ceremony is life’s material;

Omnipresent but always elusive.

For some it never happens. We spectate

And drool, and press our face against the glass.

 

Hop on a bus. Look out of the window.

Somebody is dressing up or dancing,

Saluting an old war memorial,

Or chasing a ball in their sweat-soaked whites;

French kissing, or cracking some Brazils.

Time to slam your fist. Recoiling from pain,

You curse the world it wasn’t you, again.

ceremony

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John Botterill

Thu 28th Jul 2022 18:44

😀👍

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 28th Jul 2022 08:38

Thank you, John. I think your last sentence rounds off the poem perfectly. I really appreciate your comment.

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John Botterill

Thu 28th Jul 2022 08:29

I really like lines 2-5 Stephen. I especially liked the drooling and pressing ones face against the glass. Life always seems to be happening somewhere else, doesn't it?

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 27th Jul 2022 17:26

Thanks Nigel, Frederick, John C, John B, Holden, Stephen, Pete and K Lynn.
A little obtuse for me, I suppose. I added lines 2-5 after writing the poem. Not sure if it improves things, reading it again.

Thanks to everyone for reading and liking.

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