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Sacrificed to the Gods of War

When it is taken

Your want becomes stronger

Only this time freedom

Demands a high price

Homes empty friends taken

Despair and suffering prays

Sacrifices are increasing daily

Men, Women, Children, Families

Peace for those left

Freedom to right wrongs.

 

War has no gains to offer

◄ That Sinking Feeling

Glade of Light ►

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th May 2022 00:30

Thanks for all your likes
Moonlight
John B
kJ Walker
Stephen A
Stephen G
Holden
Kevin
and
Bethany.

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Nigel Astell

Mon 9th May 2022 00:24

Thanks John I fear the same as one ends another waits to start.

Moonlight your poetic vision brings in those young soldiers who join in the sacrifice from those who send them there.

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John Botterill

Sun 8th May 2022 11:42

A stunning and apposite poem, Nigel. I like the ominous ending from a poetic point of view, but I worry that your prophesy will be accurate! One war begets the next one...

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Sunshine

Sun 8th May 2022 02:53

Freedom from war
A far fetched dream
For humans are barbaric
Killing innocent,
Enjoying the murderous deed
In the name of country and greed
War mongers thrive happily
Sacrificing young soldiers
At a price that's almost free

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