Six One

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He sat alone in the

Corner of the room

On a well-worn tired

Armchair. 

Working boots kicked off, 

While current affairs

Aired on. 

 

Tired eyes stared into wonder

As his right hand cradled

His weary head. 

I wondered was he tuned in

When he looked

Miles away from home. 

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Emer Ni Chorra

Sat 26th Mar 2022 06:19

Thank you, Ursula. Your feedback is much appreciated. 😊

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Fri 25th Mar 2022 18:03

That's lovely, Emer. You painted a vivid picture in words, a moment caught in time. Excellent!👍

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Emer Ni Chorra

Mon 21st Mar 2022 18:25

Cheers Andy😊👌

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Andy N

Sun 20th Mar 2022 19:01

Powerful Emer. You said a lot here in just a few lines. (:

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Emer Ni Chorra

Sat 19th Mar 2022 11:11

Thank you, Stephen. Happy to hear that you found this one strong and moving.

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Stephen Gospage

Sat 19th Mar 2022 08:45

A strong, moving poem. Thank you.

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