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Not the right time

I walked to the edge

Where the shore met the sea

Searching and hoping

It would be you that I’d see

 

I imagined you standing there

Looking at me

You called my name

Beseeching me to remain

 

We reached out for each other

Walked hand in hand

Along the wild windy beach

Sharing stories and laughing

At our memories

 

You told me you loved me

But the wind took your words

I leapt up to catch them

They were gone on the breeze

 

As I turned back to find you

You had taken your leave

You’ve imprinted your image

Into my mind

I can still feel your fingers

Wrapped around mine

 

I recall your words

It’s not the right time

I promise you, one day

I will make you mine

 

So now here I am

With the rain in my eyes

As the wash grabs my ankles

My feet sink into the sand

I’ve nothing but the vague feeling

Of the warmth of your hand

And the promise that soon

The stars will align

By the order of heavens

I will be yours

And you will be mine.

 

C.K. 22

 

 

◄ Red Kite

An Gorta Mor ►

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Clare

Tue 15th Mar 2022 15:03

Thanks for taking the time to read and like/comment on this, everyone.
John B and Nigel A - Glad you found it moving.
John Marks - I like what you did there! Thanks for the input, although I'm not sure the word rankle is something that I would ordinarily use. I appreciate the feedback. It's always good to get some cc.

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John Botterill

Mon 14th Mar 2022 22:45

A beautiful poem, Clare. Very moving!

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John Marks

Sun 13th Mar 2022 16:49

With the rain in my eyes,
And as the wash grabs my ankles,
I'm sinking inside,
And these memories rankle.

I think rhyme would help. Only an idea. I love the ballad format, too little used these days.

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Nigel Astell

Sun 13th Mar 2022 02:25

But the wind took your words
I leapt up to catch them

love you shared together so clearly shown in this poem.

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