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Grief

 

No one could believe that our sun was really gone.

Was it us? Something that we did, or hadn’t done?

We felt numb. Then rage

against the dying of the light.

Facing endless night we tried to conjure it with candlelight,

but tallow only goes a certain way and that’s down.

We fell to the ground in despair

where we stayed, thinking

morning wouldn’t come

so we’d better make the best of it.

Picked ourselves up, dusted down the dark.

Then a spark, a streak, an orange blue hue began to glow

and hope renewed

for a new day’s dawn.

 

 

◄ Hyperbolics

I’d really like to write an angry poem ►

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Laura Taylor

Fri 4th Feb 2022 10:56

Thanks chaps -appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

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Martin Elder

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 22:39

You never disappoint Laura and this is no exception. Love it

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Stephen Atkinson

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 17:32

Lovely stuff. Had to Google tallow though 😄

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Stephen Gospage

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 17:10

I loved this, Laura.It says so much in so few words.

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 16:03

Hey, thank you very much John!

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John Botterill

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 11:38

Beautiful and moving poetry!
I like your drabble a lot!

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Laura Taylor

Thu 3rd Feb 2022 11:10

This is a poem drabble, from my new pamphlet 'Dear Audrey (and other drabbles)'.

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