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Torn

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A raggedy thin cotton dress
On a little girl playing out
On this freezing December day.
She’s thrown out by her mama
Left out by her friends
Deserted by her dad
Neglected by the world
In the end little Ellie is just sad.
Her school calls the doctor,
The doctor calls the nurse,
Torn this and that way,
Little Ellie's just hurt.

◄ AWAY TO THE CRAGS, WHERE EAGLES SOAR

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John Marks

Fri 24th Dec 2021 01:52

Thank you Keith and a very happy Christmas to you and yours. Thanks for all your support of my scribblings. John

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keith jeffries

Thu 23rd Dec 2021 14:47

John,
An appropriate tragic poem of a broken world which not even Christmas can redeem.
Thank you for this
Keith

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