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Holy sonnet

No spring nor summer beauty hath such grace
As I have seen in one autumnal face.

John Donne

A brother and a son on the edge of a cliff
Walking and talking, they look out to sea
Me? I shout and I shout, but they don’t hear me.
They’re fading, they’re falling, off the cliff side
The sky is as huge, and the sea is as wide
As the moving of moon, as the rising of tide.
This Calvary moment, when Satan speaks well
On how to adjust things and make a heaven of hell,
If only I’ll sell him the right to the light. Darkness
Arrives in the middle of day: dripping with blood
That won’t go away. The shadow is mighty, still
Darkness holds sway. The man on the cross takes
Aeons to die. Listen to his son’s last despairing cry:

My God, my God, why hast thou passed me by?”

◄ HIRAETH

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John Marks

Wed 17th Nov 2021 23:10

Thank you, Keith, for taking the time to read closely and thus to understand fully.

"And about the ninth hour Jesus cried with a loud voice, saying, Eli, Eli, lama sabachthani? that is to say, My God, my God, why hast thou forsaken me?" This is the only saying of Christ on the cross which appears in more than one gospel, Mark 15:44 and Matthew 27:46, and is a quote from Psalm 22:1.

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keith jeffries

Wed 17th Nov 2021 22:26

A powerful poem which took me some time to grasp but I was immediately reminded of psalm 20 My God My God why hast thou forsaken me.

Thank you for this
Keith

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