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Cry

 

Getting ready for bed last night,

I heard, in the distance, a cry.

An owl? A dog’s bark? No, a man

Howling at his disappointments,

At his bad luck, his one mistake,

His limp, his pain, the sucker punch

Which floored him when caught off his guard.

Then, all at once, the silence fell.

As I sank into the mattress,

I thought of his long night ahead,

Of good deeds that he must have done,

Of sunrise he may never see.

I prayed: let his cry start again,

And I fell asleep, as one does.

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 22nd Sep 2021 16:30

And many thanks to Hugh, Stephen and Rudyard for the likes.

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Stephen Gospage

Tue 21st Sep 2021 17:19

Thank you so much, Graham. I often hear owls hooting and dogs barking in the distance at the back of our garden and sometimes stranger sounds. Like you, I often wonder what stories they have to tell. Not necessarily all sad, of course.

And thanks to Keith, Julie, Holden and Scattered Sun for reading and liking this poem.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 21st Sep 2021 09:42

This is an interesting observation of the creatures of the night

Having just been on holiday in a very rural location I was hearing owls, horses and dogs during the night and with nothing better to do one wonders about each one.

Good piece Stephen

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