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High Tide

The Channel calls and clashes at the shore,

The slippery sea wall yields no reply,

Looking down from the pier above,

The olive green waters fiercely enthrall,

Clasping the horizon at its edge,

Hushing a whisper, still an enigma to us all

 

Sinking lights fall with the sea into itself,

And then creep up through the froth,

Still shedding little light where any seldom dare to delve,

As across the day, the tide goes to and fro,

And the contrasts are so great,

Between the majestic depths and the obnoxious undertow.

 

And the life that it does harbour

So ethereal, few can be believed at all,

All so graceful within their domain,

But many still feel the need to hide,

And none rightly blame them,

As our arrival is, perhaps, their high tide

 

The salts and brines weigh upon the air,

The sands are all covered up,

When revealed again, they'll be malleable,

Water, water everywhere, the paradox is perfect,

And while giving us the means to shape,

The tide itself, we can't hope to affect.

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Andy N

Mon 26th Jul 2010 08:24

enjoyed this, Josh... lot of good material in this piece.. oddly enough i think the first stanza would stand by itself as a poem too, although i wouldn't be keen on removing it from the rest of the stanzas!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 25th Jul 2010 10:45

This is good, Josh. You are keenly aware of the obvious and show a sincere respect for the virtually unseen. 'Sinking light falls with the sea into itself' is really lovely, showing an artistic eye, a true love of language and a romantic turn of phrase that is just plain delightful. The whole concept is very mature and thoughtful.

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Ann Foxglove

Sun 25th Jul 2010 07:38

Love this Joshua, as I have enjoyed the other recent postings of yours. (Not sure about the word obnoxious though?) I admire the rythmn you manage to get. Something I can't seem to do! Really good stuff!

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