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Persephone's last laugh

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Unless otherwise stated-

All photographs and images 

Are my own work.

Unless otherwise stated-

All wording and content

Are my own work.

 

The next time you look

Over my shoulder and

Read my work-

Keep your comments

Inside your pants;

Keep your damp passages

For wetter days;

Your crisp-apple laugh

For fresher  salads.

 

I warn you Persephone

Your mirrored looks

And silent laugh

Will destroy my work.

 

NB this foto is of a woman taken by her sent to me. Authorship 

acknowledged

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Chris Dawson

Mon 19th Jul 2010 09:15

Agree with Andy that this could be further developed - interesting read.
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Andy N

Mon 19th Jul 2010 08:13

clever stuff, tommy.. very clever.. i think you could probably do more with this piece for some reason as i think it has legs for at least another few stanzas... enjoyed it still!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 18th Jul 2010 16:13

That is one fabulous woman in the photo. You should run scared. Any man will be annihilated.

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