TEARDROP
A teardrop is like a jewel trickling down your cheek making its way to your heart
It then cascades your heart with diamonds so that your heart can sparkle with love and joy...
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Thank you all for your positive feedback,with me being a novice and amongst such talented poetics on WOL I am inspired by your comments to create more poetry. My previous entries in 2009 were more sombre but I am at a better time in my life right now which is reflected in my poetry.I dont know " BLUE VELVET " but the idea of the world being filled with robins & filled with love sounds real nice to me. it's strange but I was out last night and actually had the last dance to the song "BLUE VELVET" ! x x
Beautiful, Bernadette! x
This avoids sounding like a greetings card cos it is very original. Like it! x
<Deleted User> (7212)
Mon 5th Jul 2010 23:52
Love it ! and Original.
evokes the last line in
"Blue Velvet" where the robin sits on the windowsill - this vision harking back to Sandy's previous description from her dream that the world would be filled with robins & filled with love.
<Deleted User> (6895)
Mon 5th Jul 2010 23:51
Beautiful warm sentiment Bernadette
-thank you! Stef-xx
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Thu 8th Jul 2010 07:54
Hi Bernardette - thanks for the reply in "my profile"
Blue Velvet - synchronicity at work eh?. A great film for me - but you might hate it ! all the best.B