Your Eyes

Wednesday 7th July 2010 6:12 pm (first posted Wednesday 30th June 2010 10:36 am)

I'd like to take a look at me

Through your eyes.

I want to see what you see

When you focus on me.

Do you see a friend? A lover?

A confidante? A brother?

Or do you just see me,

Just another random other?

I'd like to see what you see

Maybe then I’d understand

Why you just don't notice.

Why don't you notice me?

I'd like to take a look at me

Through your eyes.

Maybe then I'd understand.

Comments

Wed 30th Jun 2010 12:38

Not even with my manly new scar Rachel!? :-)

Thanks for the comment though! :-)

Rachel Bond

Wed 30th Jun 2010 11:40

in my eyes kenny youre lovely like a cherub...sorry if this is not 'you are rugged like a swarthy handsome film actor', but i think its better x

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