Perspective

Whatever I have done 
I might have done worse, and might have done better.
Whatever I have chosen 
I might have chosen worse, and might have chosen better.

Whatever I have tried to say, 
I might have said worse, and might have said better.
Whatever I might be, 
I might have been worse, and might have been better.

But maybe judgement at all isn’t necessary
For better or worse, perhaps everything 
Is always all it can be
Including me.

meditationperspectiveself esteemself-acceptance

◄ Tongue Tied

I Cannot Cling ►

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Feb 2021 23:41

Thank you Brian, I appreciate your comment and thanks for the 'Like' too. Your writing always has great style.

Thanks also to D Joshi, branwell kent and Holden Moncrieff for their 'Likes'. 💐

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Brian Hodgkinson

Fri 5th Feb 2021 21:51

Great meditation material. Like it, and style is smooth.😀

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Feb 2021 18:00

Thanks Stephen for commenting.

Thanks to Stephen, J.D, and Nazia for the 'Likes' 💐


I think this poem is pretty basic in how it poetically presents the concepts but meditatively it was just how it needed to be.

I quite like how I made use of the words better and worse in a new way in the final verse that I added today, I think it improves the poem a bit and presents a different perspective too but some might think it makes it worse since it has a different rhythm and flow than the other verses.

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Stephen Gospage

Fri 5th Feb 2021 17:01

A very interesting poem which makes one think and certainly not rush to judgement.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Fri 5th Feb 2021 02:56

Thank you JD. Oddly enough it is both new and old. The first two verses are a couple of years old, but I spruced it up a bit for posting so the final verse was added today.

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J.D. Bardo

Fri 5th Feb 2021 02:52

Very nice Aviva, New or old? On this poems quality, I am sold.

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