To There

To there,
And from there to there,
And there,
And finally to there.
 

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 20th Dec 2020 11:21

J.D. I get what you're saying 'there'.
it does have an AAAA rhyming scheme ?

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J.D. Bardo

Sun 20th Dec 2020 10:19

there, rhymes with there, so, there is a poem there, so there is my opinion on, "to there" (there)

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 20th Dec 2020 09:14

Brian ??

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Sun 20th Dec 2020 08:57

What constitutes a poem Aviva? Anything goes. The real question is whether you think it's worthy of sharing with others, and clearly you do as you have. You could do a series...here, somewhere else, abroad etc.

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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Sun 20th Dec 2020 01:13

It is questionable whether this is really a poem at all.
Sometimes I think it is, Sometimes I think it isn't.
Let me know what you think.

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