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A Wave from a passing bus

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We've each got

different partners now

and we're having

a real nice time

we both agreed

to separate

Parsley Sage Rosemary and Thyme.

 

We both were once

so in love

now we just stay in touch

we cherish the time

we once had

as we don't see each other

much. 

 

I once saw her on the bus

once chatted on the phone

we've sent each other

a couple of  texts

at work,

on the bus,

and at home.        

but we don't see each other much.

 

Words and image Thomas Henry Carroll.

 

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Stephen Gospage

Wed 14th Oct 2020 16:49

This is a wonderful poem. Thanks.

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Tom

Wed 14th Oct 2020 10:29

I love this Tommy - and echo Tony's comments. You've got me thinking of something I want to write now...

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Tony Hill

Wed 14th Oct 2020 10:03

This is lovely in a very melancholic way. Tony

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