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Mo

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You went away on a gray rainy day,
Dr. Night cried under clouds
Forgive my selfish tears, from this pain you must be free
You are my brother, you'd do the same for me
I told you I'd see you on the other side, guess I'll wait and see
Until then know I carry you in my heart and memory

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keith jeffries

Mon 7th Sep 2020 13:25

Patrick,

This poem has an appeal for me which I find quite inexplicable. It conjures up some interesting images. I like the line, "Dr. Night cried under the clouds."

Thank you for this
Keith

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