Haiku
Robin perched content
Bravely: you gargle water
I sit intensely.
Belinda Johnston
Comments
Tahnkyou so much Mel and Zuzanna for your encouraging comments.
I think you're right, I like the Haiku style and I'm going to work with it more
Lots of love
Belinda x
<Deleted User> (4281)
Tue 4th Mar 2008 04:58
Dear Belle ~ Perfect Haiku, so much being said with a few words! Really beautiful poem.
Warm Regards,
Zuzanna
<Deleted User> (5984)
Mon 3rd Mar 2008 23:43
What a lovely poem Bel. I think Haiku's suit your delicate style.
Well done beautiful Belle.
Mel
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Alan Summers
Mon 29th Mar 2010 12:50
Hi!
Have you written any more haiku?
all my best,
Alan
www.withwords.org.uk
http://area17.blogspot.com
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