It was____

I sat under

the Acer

besides the pond

for hours today


fleeting reflections

floating by.


Then I saw

a still reflection

of a face

that I knew

linger in my mind

and a river of tears

cascaded down my cheeks.


It was___

◄ A Masterpiece

The oblivious world ►


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Abdul Ahmad

Sat 8th Aug 2020 16:00

Anmolpreet Kaur I'm confident given time the mystery will be solved. Thank you for striking the like.

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Anmolpreet Kaur

Sat 8th Aug 2020 15:27

A mystery yet to solve......i loved it.


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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 4th Aug 2020 09:51

Shaifa thank you for your usual well thought out remarks. Always a pleasure to read your comments.

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 4th Aug 2020 09:49


If you meant me as yourself it may be true.
It definately wasn't me as myself.
Then it could be anyone.
Thank you my friend for hitting the like.

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Shifa Maqba

Tue 4th Aug 2020 09:37

Some thoughts are best left ambiguous, shrouded in mystery, and your poem does complete justice to that. Contemplative and mystical!

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Paul Sayer

Tue 4th Aug 2020 07:51


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Abdul Ahmad

Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:37

Philipos thank you for your continued support and sending a like.

Emeka thank you for striking the like.

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Mon 3rd Aug 2020 22:01

Cliff hanger waiting to unfold. P.

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