Hopeless Rescue
(NB. An Tanka I think - first time I've tried one of them.
Phew)
Lost in pensive regrets
The wind blows over the deserted
Coastline into the sunrise
Straining for the men to come
To rescue the boats while they could.
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Andy N
Tue 14th Jul 2020 08:08
Thanks Nicola, Shifa and Blueksy for the likes here.
This has come from joining a facebook group on tankas,
although I was familiar with them I hadn't wrote one before.
I may well do another one of them when I get chance.