Your text was a touch,
tender and twinkling,
mellowing, unwrinkling
my furrowed heart,
your mind alighting on mine
as lacewing fly on leaf.
So lovely and light.
Angel-breath,
a petal wafting through the ether.
Your caring, a kiss.
Beauitful, Dave..
To be honest, I would changed the last line to read
'Your caring,
a kiss'
this will it makes the point more at the end at it.
Otherwise, i love this.. it's a heart breaker in a nice way! lol
Lovely sentiments Dave : )
p.s. If someone texted me those words - I think my heart would melt.
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Cate Greenlees
Mon 17th May 2010 16:57
This is lovely Dave, tender and gentle... very touching.
Cate xx