They took her exuberance and fled away
Let her sink in never ending milky way
Prancing here and there with utmost misery
She couldn't resist, merely
they are her love once again
Only thing she can do
Sway away from mighty grief and never go back again
Philipos
Sat 20th Jun 2020 09:43
I like your minimalist style - leaving the reader to probe away at the deeper meaning of your words - in some ways I am reminded of the works by John Donne - it was a style of writing I often used to emulate. Nice one. Did you mean to use the word 'fles' in your first sentence?
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Nayla Shahyd
Tue 30th Jun 2020 17:39
Thank you so much Philipos, Its a privilege to get admirable response from such a stellar poet. Even so, I don't have any idea about John Donne but surely will explore his poetry. Oh! it's a mistake the word is "fled" you can check it again i have rectify it and again thank you so much for giving such a good compliment