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WHO TOOK MY MOON?

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Stars are many, moon remains one

My only mistake was, 

I thought you as a moon

Amidst the million Stars, 

I misunderstood 

But we were already that far, 

Closeness was just of periphery 

And not the core, 

But foolish me understood 

It as josephine kind sore, 

If it would have touched your feather

It would never go as it went, 

From the very beginning you signalled

That it is just another dent, 

Foolish was i

Who became ready for every bent, 

Dichotimical you are

Living somebody else's lives, 

Being own ideas powerful 

But kept in secret hives, 

The only one you gave your fore

Was hyderabadi vibes, 

All in all fool was i

Caught in waterless ocean like fish, 

Who have a tender heart

But gonna break in either of dish, 

And the chapter will be done soon

It was my mistake to thought you as my moon, 

But unfortunately you just flickered

Like a short nap of afternoon! 

 

 

 

◄ FULL MOON NIGHT

ARE YOU THAT WORTHY? ►

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MANISHA SAINI

Wed 19th Aug 2020 12:55

Thank you Po. Your appreciation means a lot.

Just curious about your story...

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MANISHA SAINI

Sun 16th Aug 2020 04:04

May be the mistaken moon. hehe

What was your reason, by the way?

Anil Sharma

Sat 15th Aug 2020 15:01

Amazing work Ms. saini. can realte a lot.

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MANISHA SAINI

Fri 14th Aug 2020 17:03

Thanks Abdul!

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Abdul Ahmad

Tue 16th Jun 2020 16:03

To have made only one mistake is commendable.

"Caught in waterless ocean like a fish" mind boggling imagery.

Enjoyed reading this work

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