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Another
In a series
Look into the eyes
Make the heart float
Make the heart sink.
Another
In a series
Of reasons
Make the heart open
Make the heart close.
Another
One of those blinding visions
Make the heart beat
Make the heart ache.
He was another
And another is what they all were.
makes me think off hugo williams's stuff a bit here, georgina - i really enjoyed this.. the last stanza is a nice change in pace totally x
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<Deleted User> (7904)
Wed 12th May 2010 20:06
This is nice - really tight, spare, and controlled. There isn't an extraneous word.