Small Reveals

tell me something about myself 

the subject you know so well 

strike those secret chords 

which you’ve known of all along 


it doesn’t really need to rhyme 

there’s no point in wasting time 

when we could be making love 

or better yet singing a song 


your antennae pull me in 

there’s no more interference 

I’m a picture in your mind 

painted over a million times 


show me your deepest secret 

I need to see myself 

even after you show me the trick 

there’s magic in doing it well 

◄ The Memory Drill

(I’ll want this back if we split) ►


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Martin Elder

Wed 20th May 2020 19:41

Hey Bob this seems like the lyrics to a song. A well crafted song of which I would expect nothing less from you
Nice one my friend

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Robert C Gaulke

Tue 19th May 2020 15:00



Tue 19th May 2020 12:47

So beautifully crafted. A delight to the heart. Such a lovely expression of delightful feelings. Leaves your readers wondering about the rest that would follow.
Pure love resides in pure heart. Sucha lovely honourable commitment shown. A dreamy treat!!

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